Blackthorn we talked about your build in the fleet chat, so just give it a try and see what happens.
Blakmage86, since you are using the Dreadnought I don't think you need a lot of points in skills that boost your hull. I've never used it but I know Cruisers have strong hulls, so those points might be useful someplace else. If you want to leave maybe like 3 points in those kinds of skills, that should be fine.
I don't think you need Starship Auxiliary Performance because it doesn't seem like you have any abilities that use auxiliary power.
Other than that it looks good. If it were me, I'd try out the changes I suggested as well as look at other Cruiser builds to get some ideas.
I notice that most of the builds on this page opt for maxing out some abilities at the expense of leaving many with no points at all. Since you get 18 points for each skill at levels 1 through 3 and only 10 at levels 7 through 9, I like to put at least three points on just about every skill. I used to max out some skills when you had to reach level 9 in order to be able to train your BOffs. Now that you can train skills at levels 3 and 6, I hardly ever put anything higher than that on my builds.
That said, if these builds work for you, keep using them. Everybody has a different playing style and if you are comfortable with what you're used to, by all means use it. If you.re not, then you might want to think about spreading out your points to get more bang for your buck.
Live long and prosper,
If it ain't broke, don't fix it.